Write your 2nd paragraph on google docs and share it with your partner. If you are still unsure whether you are on the right track, invite me to your google doc.
Comparison Essay
Introduction
You should have
this done.
Your last sentence
in this paragraph should tell us what your opinion is and what you will be
talking about in each paragraph. Example:
The classmates are jealous of Margot and
John Joseph and consequently they treat them like outcasts.
Okay…you’re at home and you don’t know what
to do about paragraph 2. Try following this outline and maybe it will help.
Body Paragraph is
about jealousy
Topic Sentence: Talk about the main idea of your paragraph.
Envy can separate and
isolate people. It leaves an empty hole and doesn’t allow compassion to grow.
Point 1:
John Joseph’s
classmates envy him.
Show how by giving
an example
Point 2
Margot is also an
unfortunate victim of jealousy
Show how by giving
and example
Point 3:
John Joseph’s
classmates are jealous of Teresa
For example, for
instance……
Point 4
Margot’s
classmates don’t believe that the sun is real
Show how by giving
an example.
Now write a last
sentence that connects all your ideas together.
English 12
Your final journal should be ready for Monday. I will mark it and you will choose the one that you think is the best. You will revise it and add to it and will hand it in by Friday.
English 11
Last weekend before your project is due. Make sure that everything is ready for run through on Monday.
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